Tuesday, October 27, 2009

guess my tone~=P

My first time at the dentist was when i was 6 years old. Older kids said bad things about what happens when i enter the doctors office.
I was sitting in front of the counter where other kids my age were waiting too. i was checking out this cute girl who was about my age when i heard a kid yell from the room where the doctor was. Every fiber of hair that was on my body stood up when i heard this gruesome shout. All sorts of dreadful imagination drove into my mind and i felt goose bumps come up my body. I said to my mom "Mommy can't we go home now? My teeth feel much better." However that didn't persuade her, no, nothing in the world would persuade my mother. Then i heard a laugh from the boy who screamed not just a minute ago, and i saw him come out with a lollipop in his mouth. The pretty girl went inside next and had the same procedure as the boy with the lollipop. I just couldn't wait to see what the dentist would do with me too...
TBC

5 comments:

  1. anxious & nervous. whos the pretty girl?

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  2. Anxious and Nervous~^^
    I think that you were very anxious and nervous about your trip into the dentists office. lol~ it's a really funny story! =]]

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  3. My mood was Anxious and Nervous!!!tnx guys for guessing it right!!!
    i tried to show this mood by showing how scared but curious my main character was~

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  4. Nervous
    ? ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
    예솔?
    U WERE NERVOUS CUZ YOU DIDN'T NO WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN 2 U.

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